Animation is good, but this animation feels a bit bare. It feels like you were going to add more but you decided not to.
Also, the sound for his armor was a bit rough. might have wanted to try and mi it with foot steps.
Indeed, this is actually a quick animation i put together in two days while i worked on a bigger project, you know, just to not have the channel abandoned.
Also yeah, i've never been a competent sound editor XD
Thanks for the critic!
For practice things, you might want to upload to the dumping grounds.
oh i didnt know. thank you
Your animation is fluid and it does not have a problem with movement. However, your art style seems to be a bit lacking. All in all you did a good job.
Please do not take my comment as an attack, but you need to work on your art style and animation skills quite a bit. But I can see you do have passion for animating, so keep working hard and improving.
He dreamed of freedom...and all he got was pain.
May I offer advice? Use the shift key for straight lines and for shading it is easier to use the pen tool and fill tool combination. Also tweeting is nice and I see that is what you mainly focused of but it would add more life to your animations if you made your characters move within that symbol that you 'tween. (make yes move, head turn)
No onto my opinion. I believe that you need to work out a few kinks still and that is perfectly fine. I am still working out mine as well. But, you cartoon seems bland and It was unclear as to the story you were trying to convey. I enjoyed how you tried to add a 3D feel to the animation but when you zoom in the background should zoom as well.
Over all I think you just need to keep practicing and refine you skills and technique. Animation isn't very easy and sometimes people will ridicule your hard work, but do not let that stop you from doing something you love to do.
Keep at it.
I remember farting loudly during a quiet and tense scene. I still laugh about it.
I've made some shitty videos so I'm not gonna be an ass about yours.
I will say this, the animation was a bit jerky, if you clean it up it would be more appealing to watch. The characters look like they are from other shows and whats with the portal bots? I might suggest next time making original characters.
Their flying wasn't quite natural either. Fixing that up would make the video seem like it has physics.
On the other side
The style was ok, it looked like it was rotoscoped but it was 3d wasn't it.
the sound effects and music were fine. (besides the guns' sound effects.)
the background fit well
over all it's not bad enough to give a one or two, but it's not good enough for a four or five.
yup the characters are not original because this was a short experiment using photoshop when I normally use flash- I wasn't worried about that since it was just a concept thing.
I'm working on a different concept vid since this one motivated me to do a better one- and yup it is 3D.
cause that 's what I do- and I'm purposely trying to find a way to make 3D look cel-shaded and that was the whole reason for the experiment
It's good and funny but I noticed a few things. The wheels on Luigi's vehical were static (as in they did not turn like they should have.) Great job on everything else though.
yea, lol. i didnt realized it until i uploaded it to NG. lol i wrote it on the description. i totally forgot about it lolol. but when i get the chance ill fix it up :)/ ty
Art and shading is nice, but you'r boobs are a bit awkward.
yeah i was a bit wierd at drawing boobs when i did this
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