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[Phil Learns Self Defence]

Very simple. I'm not a fan of the robot voice myself. Would love to see the characters not so static. They needed just a bit more life.

[A Date With Brick]

Animation is a bit static. I'm guessing you're going for a bit of a creepy vibe with this so I get why he talks almost in a whisper, but make sure we can hear what he is saying. Audio sounded a bit quiet for me personally. Not bad all in all.

SmoochToons responds:

Thanks! I wanted to make him kinda stiff and robotic on purpose to make the whole thing kinda weird. That's why he doesn't blink through the whole thing. But I really should've made the animation more fluid whenever he does move, so thank you for pointing that out.

[Nostalgia Critic x Isabelle the animation]

Audio needs to be fixes. It sounds like it's at 16 bits. Easy fix dont worry. Also make sure set the quality to best. (Idk if you're using flash or not.)
Also, careful with using copyrighted music. It can get you into a lawsuit.

[Pantomime Project]

Lol. Good job. Would love to see it more fleshed out with some color and audio

ThatDarnFoxCreations responds:

Thank-you. I may follow up on it sometime.

[goku vs mirus-preview]

Video is very poor without voices. DBZ was popular for their long fights, yelling, and monologues. In this scene it was a conversation and it felt bare with out the voices.
However, everything else was nice. The animation was decent, and the sounds were good.

angelferre responds:

ok, I respect your opinion, but I want to clarify certain points, this is a preview, that is, it is not complete, so the final will be different, but it will not have voices because I have no resources for that

[HELLRAISER/PINHEAD ANIMATED SHORT FILM]

Animation feels a bit rushed. Not bad audio and the story was good. There are parts where the art style is inconsistent. But I see the ambition and the heart that went into this. Might also need a bit higher rating

SonnyFern responds:

The animation is pretty rushed. I try to get these out as fast as I can honestly. Lake Villa Vamps I take my time a bit more, but I'm trying to get one out every few months for youtube/analytics purposes. Thanks for the comment!

[Animation Telephone #2]

Very short. I kinda see the joke, but it's not too funny, no offense. The animation is charming though.

[Sublo and Tangy Mustard #14 - Tito's Girlfriend]

Lol ok. Well done.

[Elon's secret room]

Audio is a bit eh. Leon's walk cycle had a weird jump, or skip. The joke was funny, but could of used a little better execution. Not bad overall

CALIFLOWER responds:

Thank you for your feedback!

I will try to make future walking animations better in the future.

Thank you so much for your feedback and have a wonderful day!

[no more heroes]

Sound is a bit off for me. Everything seems to lack impact. Like the audio seems a little "naked". Character animation also looked a little floaty. But, I know how difficult 3D can be.

Edit: try adding some weight to your characters. Check out "the animators survival kit" it's a great book. For the audio, add some impact sounds. Bullets hitting metal, casings bouncing off the floor, so on. But it's a well done animation.

Tealphoenixreborn responds:

I appreciate the feedback but what would you recommend on me improving on sound? please elaborate on lacking "impact" and what tips can you recommend for the animation to look less floaty?

Thank you so much! now I'm understanding your point, and I will definitely check out the animator's survival kit book. I'm trying to improve as much as I can, thanks again for the tips and recommendation.