Try cleaning up lines and it'd be great.
Ya I appreciate the concern man ill keep that in mind :D I Did this in like 2 days
Audio wasn't good and the animation was bad. The script was good though. Just work on animation and audio then it'll be great. Might want to try to make your own backgrounds instead of using pictures. It takes away from the cartoon world illusion that you are trying to create.
Wait for tomorrow. I will be releasing our 4th episode, which improves on both of those problems. This episode I made about a year ago when I first started Flash. This latest one I'm about to post I made 2 months ago.
you need to fix the audio. it's really easy I promise
Yon need to owk on his arms and legs. also touch up on his lines a bit. One more thing bif you add shading it might look cooler. :P
Definatly funny in the long run, but your personal art needs some practice.
I will practice. Thanks for suggesting!
XD beautifully done!
might want to add a play button, and the audio is a bit wanky. Other than that it was good.
Great animations and amazing voice actors. But they are called namekians.
Might I suggest a preloader?
Great job! Need to work on the lip syncing a little but other than that this animation was perfect! Can't wait for the next one!
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