Deadtuna's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[KEVIN & ERIC - Fries]

I like the animation and I see what you're going for. Dont be afraid to get wild with the voice acting. I can hear you were holding back while doing your voice over. Other than that it was fun to watch.

SpinnlesTFox responds:

Thanks! :D

[A warning from G-man]

Is this just a voice over or the animation?

Hidden-Maverick responds:

It's a bit of both

[42 Seconds of a Man Sneezing]

That's what it feels like

AustinKimmell responds:

Thank you!

[How Movies In Hollywood Are Made]

Lol. Simple animation. I cant wait to see more from you.

ZacQuinn137 responds:

thanks. should be posting another one tommorow

[Fine Day]

Very artistic and well done. I love the black and white.

laTomate responds:

Thank you very much!

[My hero academia]

I see what you're going for. Try adding some audio and effects. Also zoom out the background when you zoom out on your character.

SketchItDIY responds:

I've added sound and zoom in and out's before but I've lost that version

[Zelda breath of the wild My summary (foolish.)]

Lol same experience. Good job and the video. Would love to see a little more go into the animation but the art style was nice.

[HOW TO ANIMATE WITH ADOBE FLASH TUTORIAL #1 (LAYERS & SIMPLE MOVEMENT)]

Most people on this site are animators. This would do better on YT

KassotisProductions responds:

I agree and you can find it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7oi7favDCoI
Thanks for the above average rating!

[DAMPE! - Game Grumps Animated]

Beautiful

[How to wear a facemask (my first Animation)]

I can see you're trying your best to make something you're proud of while also trying to stay light hearted. Your audio quality needs some work. Sounds like you recorded the video in a fairly empty room. Try putting pillows or some sort of noise canceling material (foam) in the area you record to fix that audio. If you need a better microphone I suggest the Blue Yeti. You can get them from almost any electronic store and they are a fair price. As for the art and animation, it isnt bad, but it didnt keep my attention. Give it a little more life. Try moving the character around with some squashing and stretching. Watch Odd1sout on YT for some examples of it. Other than that not bad